Ditto, if it were to be made into a physical, hard-copy book or remain as PDF.
The scene / character perspective changes are jarring without re-arranging it.
# 13701 | 9 years ago on Mon, May 16 2016 at 7:07 pm |
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Ditto, if it were to be made into a physical, hard-copy book or remain as PDF.
The scene / character perspective changes are jarring without re-arranging it. The blue sky is infinitely high, crystal clear...that's what the world should be...a world of infinite possibilities, laid before us, crystal clear" |
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So I hear this was a good role play you guys did. Maybe I'll have to try to get around to reading this "novelization". ࢦ |
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