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# 11056 20 years ago on Mon, Apr 4 2005 at 2:18 pm

Well worth the wait! Lovely broken glass! I do so love well-drawn broken glass...

My stabwound was way more fun, though...

# 11057 20 years ago on Mon, Apr 4 2005 at 2:46 pm

Heh, the water rushing out of the tank looks good, too.

Worth the wait, indeed. Not much plot to speculate in this one, though. Just some good, old-fashioned violence. And I guess it'll be leading up to more interesting things. The rising action of each new chapter's sort of also the falling action of the one before it, or something. Right?

# 11058 20 years ago on Mon, Apr 4 2005 at 3:33 pm

Indeed. I make a graph:

(Dang white background. Totally renders the fading-out invisible. )

# 11059 20 years ago on Mon, Apr 4 2005 at 7:24 pm

Ha! Sweeeet.

Ravenna didn't have much trouble getting out of that glass tube after all. I guess she just stuck around long enough for the Zetsfir lady and Taygeta to blab out some information and was waiting for the right moment to punch some glass with her newly-regenerated arm.

How did she get that arm, anyway?

And the broken glass indeed is cool. Looks like it was really thick, too. Better than the average window

"Dangerous toys are fun, but you could get hurt!"

# 11060 20 years ago on Mon, Apr 4 2005 at 8:41 pm

I don't get that graph, NK.

That was awesome how Virulyde stabbed Taygeta through the hand. Might be a little more blood than would be realistic, but it still looks good. I'm surprised there isn't blood on Ravenna's hand from punching right through that glass. Must be some weak-ass glass.


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