Posts by KarmaJolt

Elise nodded. "I can go ahead and give Jax the word but we'll have a limited amount of time to get into the inner area once the cameras go haywire," she replied. "Obviously, it's going to raise red flags if all of the cameras go offline all at once." ...

Elise and the others got out of the car and headed down the stairs from the roof of the warehouse. Once they reached the first floor, Elise motioned for them to follow her outside. "Okay, we'll be heading Northeast for about a quarte...

Elise walked over to the bar and paid the tab. She briefly spoke with Callahan and motioned to Shell, Jax, and Atlas to follow her. The group exited the bar and walked over to a parking lot. Elise led them over to an expensive looking flying ...

"I'm glad you two decided to take an interest in this job," said Elise. Elise looked around, to make sure no one suspicious was listening in. "Normally, for this kind of thing, we'd use one of the private rooms," she said. "Since I'...

Ditto, if it were to be made into a physical, hard-copy book or remain as PDF. The scene / character perspective changes are jarring without re-arranging it. ...